persuasive writing

Today day I  learnt the structure of persuasive writing, and wrote down a list of reasons for why we shouldn't have a animal as a  pet, I also learn how to write reasons and to back it up with a example, and how to have a opinion.   

Angels

This week we have been learning about angels, I think that I'm going good but i cloud do better, the easy part was drawing the line and the centre point, the hard part was trying to  get as much different angels, we also learnt some names for angels if it is less than 90* then it called acute and if it more then 90* and  less than 180* then it called obtuse. I found this learning really interesting to do but next time I'm gonna focus so I know more about angels.    

Thunder & Lightning

The last past few week we have been learning how to write a narrative my hard was my plan because i had to many option to pick from, my easy part was to bring my imaginary to life, my next step will be to add better language to my writing.

Thunder & Lightning

In a small sleepy town, down the hollow street there is  blue house, with a golden cat looking at the vivid sunshine, coming from the sky. Down the steps hearing a cat  meowing fiercely I pick it up,’’oh here you are you tricky cat, I have you been looking for you, where have you been? ‘’ I sit down and play with Tom.

A big storm seems to be heading this way. I check the forecast and it seems to be 20:00 minutes away, I think to myself we could go back  inside and rap up in a cosy,cushion blanket, or we stay out here for little bit. Sitting there with all the minutes flying past like flash running for victory, I check the time I holler  ‘’ 1:00 minutes left till the storm gets here’’ I pick myself up, flying up the stairs.

Suddenly lightning strikes the tree, the thunder BOOMS!, vibrating the windows shattering them into shards. I rush under the table role into a ball. BOOM! BANG! CRASH! The house tumbles down like rain dancing and tumbling from the sky, I hear everything falling from the wall. I get out from under the table, rush to my bedroom, slam on the brakes, ‘’Tom’’ I holler I look to the left, look to the right, see before my eyes Tom crushed under the big wall POOR TOM.